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Author Information Reviewed Books Other Books
Notes: (M) - Moonworld Series
Notes: (C) - Call to the Edge Series
Souls in the Great Machine (C) Voyage of the Shadow Moon (M)
Mirrorsun Rising
The Centurion's Empire
The Miocene Arrow (C)
Eyes of the Calculor (C)
Souls in the Great Machine Added 10/22/01
Souls in the Great Machine - Sean McMullenOur RankingI picked this one up after following a few "this book was also bought by" links at Amazon.com and after reading the reviews there was intrigued enough to pick it up. This has basically become my equivalent of sitting in a bookstore and reading the back cover of books to try and find some new authors. What is amazing, is that for the most part, Amazon is right. I'd say about 75% of the books I buy this way turn out to be solid picks. Unfortunately, this one fell into the other 25% block. It's a shame too, because the book started off on the right foot. Basically, the tale is set in a post apocalyptic Australia, where after some disaster that is not clear to the characters, technology has been set back to almost the 17th century level. Pistols are now the basic weapon of choice, and long distance communication is carried out by a crude "beam flash" network scattered throughout the land. Meanwhile, one of the main characters, Zarvora has created a machine called the "Calculator" that is decades ahead of its time. This device will revolutionize the technology and even the politics of the time and wind up completely changing the world as it was once known. Throughout the book, McMullen actually has some very wild ideas. The Calculator itself and how it works and even evolves throughout the story is very interesting. Even some of the more everyday stuff like the beamflash and even the culture of the various city states shows a lot of thought and planning on McMullen's part. Probably the most interesting aspect is what is knows as simply "The Call". The Call is this mysterious force that passes over the land in waves, almost like a storm front. Where ever it goes, it turns all mammals into a kind of lemming, overriding all of their free thoughts and compelling them to just start walking in a direction. Even if this means walking over a cliff or into a river to drown, once caught in this, you are trapped. McMullen comes up with an entire world that has evolved around trying to survive these waves. The ideas he has around it are fascinating and some of the ideas to survive this are very imaginative. Unfortunately, McMullen couldn't keep the same level of intrigue around the characters and plot. The characters and their interactions are really the downfall of an otherwise good story. They are very shallow and are what I consider cookie cutter kind of people, all with one dominant trait that rules them. No character has a complex mix of emotions, drives or ambitions. To make it worse, they act completely irrationally. The concept of love in this book is a main focus, which is a shame because it winds up to be fairly warped. Characters fall sickenly in love at the drop of a dime, marching off to conquer entire nations to find someone they have seen once, or forgive decades of servitude for someone they just met. Normally, I can sort of ignore this in a lot of books and move on. The problem is, McMullen actually makes it into part of the plot so it is everywhere so there is no way to avoid it. Without the weak characterization this would have been a good read. However, it just grows so tiresome, that it became nearly impossible to finish the book. It is a shame since the rest of the book was pretty strong. There is a sequel to this that supposedly improves quite a bit on the characters. I might give it a try and hope McMullen corrects the one (a huge one mind you) weakness in his book. But it'll be a while before I do I think.
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